Lord Byron

 

 

Darkness

 

I had a dream, which was not all a dream.

The bright sun was extinguish'd, and the stars

Did wander darkling in the eternal space,

Rayless, and pathless, and the icy earth

Swung blind and blackening in the moonless air;

Morn came, and went - and came, and brought no day,

And men forgot their passions in the dread

Of this desolation; and all hearts

Were chill'd into a selfish prayer for light:

And they did live by watchfires - and the thrones,

The palaces of crowned kings - the huts,

The habitations of all things which dwell,

Were burnt for beacons; cities were consumed,

And men were gathered round their blazing homes

To look once more into each other's face;

Happy were those who dwelt within the eye

Of the volcanos, and their mountain-torch:

A fearful hope was all the world contain'd;

Forest were set on fire - but hour by hour

They fell and faded - and the crackling trunks

Extinguish'd with a crash - and all was black.

The brows of men by the despairing light

Wore an unearthly aspect, as by fits

The flashes fell upon them; some lay down

And hid their eyes and wept; and some did rest

Their chins upon their clenched hands, and smiled;

And others hurried to and fro, and fed

Their funeral piles with fuel, and looked up

With mad disquietude on the dull sky,

The pall of a past world; and then again

With curses cast them down upon the dust,

And gnash'd their teeth and howl'd: the wild birds shriek'd,

And, terrified, did flutter on the ground,

And flap their useless wings; the wildest brutes

Came tame and tremolous; and vipers crawl'd

And twined themselves among the multitude,

Hissing, but stingless - they were slain for food:

And War, which for a moment was no more,

Did glut himself again; - a meal was bought

With blood, and each sate sullenly apart

Gorging himself in gloom: no love was left;

All earth was but one thought - and that was death,

Immediate and inglorious; and the pang

Of famine fed upon all entrails - men

Died, and their bones were tombless as their flesh;

The meagre by the meagre were devoured,

Even dogs assail'd their masters, all save one,

And he was faithful to a corpse, and kept

The birds and beasts and famish'd men at bay,

Till hunger clung them, or the dropping dead

Lured their lank jaws; himself sought out no food,

But with a piteous and perpetual moan

And a quick desolate cry, licking the hand

Which answered not with a caress - he died.

The crowd was famish'd by degrees; but two

Of an enormous city did survive,

And they were enemies; they met beside

The dying embers of an altar-place

Where had been heap'd a mass of holy things

For an unholy usage; they raked up,

And shivering scraped with their cold skeleton hands

The feeble ashes, and their feeble breath

Blew for a little life, and made a flame

Wich was a mockery; then they lifted up

Their eyes as it grew lighter, and beheld

Each other's aspects - saw, and shriek'd, and died -

Even of their mutual hideousness they died,

Unknowing who he was upon whose brow

Famine had written Fiend. The world was void,

The populous and the powerful - was a lump,

Seasonless, herbless, treeless, manless, lifeless -

A lump of death - a chaos of hard clay.

The rivers, lakes, and ocean stood still,

And nothing stirred within their silent depths;

Ships sailorless lay rotting on the sea,

And their masts fell down piecemeal; as they dropp'd

They slept on the abyss without a surge -

The waves were dead; the tides were in their grave,

The moon their mistress had expired before;

The winds were withered in the stagnant air,

And the clouds perish'd; Darkness had no need

Of aid from them - She was the universe.

 

Source:

http://www.online-literature.com/byron/685/

 

 

 

 

 

 

The idea of the poem is horror, desolation, individuality. Reading this poem it seems to be dying, alone with no one to help you. You are alone in this terrifying world, where everyone is your enemy, and you should fight to survive. The poem transmits misery, sadness, there are no elements of happiness, and all is dark, there is no light, no life in the poem. All in the poem is dying, losing vitality, losing life.

         The form of the poem seems to be easy to read, but it is difficult, because there are no spaces, there are no stanzas. The entire poem is a text without stops. It consists in eighty-two verses without spaces, there are no stanzas. It has a structured form. All the verses have ten syllables, or almost all, but the sentences do not coincide with the verses. Sometimes sentences are divided, the beginning of the sentence is in one verse, and the end of the sentence is in the next verse, so that makes the reading a little bit difficult. There are a lot of abbreviations to make verses of ten syllables. For example, in line 2: EXTINGUISH’D; in line 18: CONTAIN’D; GNASH’D and SHRIEK’D in line 32; CRAWL’D in line 35; in lines 49 and 55: FAMISH’D; in line 59 HEAP’D; PROPP’D in line 76; and PERISH’D in line 81. All these abbreviations make verses of ten syllables.

That poem is too long, and it is hard to read because of the density of vocabulary.

The title of this poem makes the reader think about fears, scaring things or frightening ones. It is because of darkness is related to the dark colour, and for most of the people this colour implies thinking on death or on horror thoughts, nightmares, one’s fears and bad experiences of life. So, only reading the title you think about the worst things you could imagine. Obscure colours are connected to death, and related to witchcraft. Most of the people connect the dark or obscure colours with terrifying episodes of their lives. Always, dark has been related to terror.

The word DARKNESS appears only once in the poem. It is in line 81, and here there is a personification. The poet says: “Darkness had no need of aid from them – she was the universe”.

         There is the only reference on female gender through the entire poem. This had been written by the poet on purpose. The poet, here, is comparing females with universe, and saying she is behind all bad phenomenons in the world. There are deaths in the world because she is the universe, and she has control.

The verbs are written in past tenses. The poet combines past simple, present perfect and past perfect, and there are five times where the poet writes an affirmative sentence but using the auxiliary verb in the past form: DID, and the root of the main verb. Those are: DID WANDER, in line 3; DID LIVE, in line 10; DID REST, in line 25; DID GLUT, in line 39; and DID SURVIVE, in line 56.

         We can relate most of the verbs of this poem to death, some examples are EXTINGUISH’D, WERE BURNT, WERE CONSUMED, FELL, FADED, WERE SLAIN, WERE DEVORED, and DIED, WAS VOID, LAY, FELL DOWN, WERE DEAD or HAD EXPIRED are verbs which are directly related to death.

The first effect on me, the reader, is a sense of frustration, of having no solution for the world presented by the poet in this poem, a world of death and obscurantism, with corpses, with empty spaces and with no elements of life or survival.

Focusing on semantics, there are a lot of words related to death and the end of life, the end of human life, PALL and CURSES, for example. Other words like PANG, BONES, TOMBLESS, BEASTS, FAMISH’D MEN, or COLD SKELETON HANDS are some that come from the semantic field of death.

But after reading again and again the poem, I realized that there is one sentence, the first sentence of the poem, where the poet writes in first person: “I had a dream, which was not all a dream”. In this sentence the poet is saying that what he is writing could be a dream, maybe a nightmare, but it is the cruel reality.

I would lie if I say I enjoyed the poem, because it is full of death and fear. I felt sad when reading it, because I think the poet is describing the real world, and that world could be our world.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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