Conclusion
After reading this hypertext and done my try to best analyse it, I would dare say that it is has quite a simplicity in the tools aspect.
The language used makes it enjoyable because it feels near the reader, but after reading all I've read about hypertexts, the only thing that has surprised me was the non-linearity of the story, because all the jumps the story made with the different screens were a bit distracting at the beginning. But at the end of it, I can say that it wasn’t as bad as I expected, with big temporal jumps or a lot of flashbacks, so when I finished reading it and had an overview of the actions that happen on the story, it was like reading a normal novel.
Well, for me, it was also a bit frustrating not being able to see how much I had read or how much I still had to read.
I think that the author has achieved his goal of making the equivalent hypertext to the short story that he was interested in. It’s amusing and from my point of view, I would describe it with the adjectives Falco ambitioned for this hypertext: creative and original.