CONCLUSION
       

        I think this story makes me feel a bit confused about the real meaning of the text, in some ends they are on the roof, and in others they are inside the house which is burning. Moreover, you have some parts of the text that their link have no end and no continue with more links, so you have to go back. The author says that this text is nowadays to correct it if he find other solutions better than today's texts. (http://www.bareword.com/ashes/about.shtml)


        I don't like this kind of text very much, I feel confusion all the time! In addition, I hate having too much possibilities to do your story, because when you read it again, and you choose another option you find other possibility, sometimes, in the opposite side. Maybe, I feel in this way, because I've to use the dictionary to make easier the comprehension, the vocabulary has a lot of especific adejectives to describe things unknown to me.


        I wish some day understand better this type of literature. So I hope you'll try to read it, and if you like writing, try to write down a hypertext! why not? 



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