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Ted
Hughes (1930 - 1998) BRIDE AND
GROOM LIE HIDDEN FOR THREE DAYS; Crow, 1972 |
She gives him his eyes, she found themAmong some rubble, among some beetlesHe gives her her skinHe just seemed to pull it down out of the air and lay it over herShe weeps with fearfulness and astonishmentShe has found his hands for him, and fitted them freshly at the wristsThey are amazed at themselves, they go feeling all over herHe has assembled her spine, he cleaned each piece carefullyAnd sets them in perfect orderA superhuman puzzle but he is inspiredShe leans back twisting this way and that, using it and laughingIncredulousNow she has brought his feet, she is connecting themSo that his whole body lights upAnd he has fashioned her new hipsWith all fittings complete and with newly wound coils, all shiningly oiledHe is polishing every part, he himself can hardly believe itThey keep taking each other to the sun, they find they can easilyTo test each new thing at each new stepAnd now she smoothes over him the plates of his skullSo that the joints are invisibleAnd now he connects her throat, her breasts and the pit of her stomachWith a single wireShe gives him his teeth, tying the roots to the centrepin of his bodyHe sets the little circlets on her fingertipsShe stiches his body here and there with steely purple silkHe oils the delicate cogs of her mouthShe inlays with deep cut scrolls the nape of his neckHe sinks into place the inside of her thighsSo, gasping with joy, with cries of wondermentLike two gods of mudSprawling in the dirt, but with infinite careThey bring each other to perfection. |
BRIDE AND GROOM LIE HIDDEN FOR THREE DAYS;Crow, 1972
http://www.poetryconnection.net/poets/Ted_Hughes/18557
Sylvia Plath (1932 - 1963)
MAD GIRL’S LOVE SONG; The
Bell Jar, 1954
I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead;I lift my lids and all is born again.(I think I made you up inside my head.) The stars go waltzing out in blue and red,And arbitrary blackness gallops in:I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead. I dreamed that you bewitched me into bedAnd sung me moon-struck, kissed me quite insane.(I think I made you up inside my head.)God topples from the sky, hell's fires fade:Exit seraphim and Satan's men:I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead. I fancied you'd return the way you said,But I grow old and I forget your name.(I think I made you up inside my head.)I should have loved a thunderbird instead;At least when spring comes they roar back again.I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead.
(I think I made you up inside my head.)
MAD GIRL’S LOVE SONG; The
Bell Jar, 1954
http://www.americanpoems.com/poets/sylviaplath/1411
Ted Hughes uses a free verse in his poem Bride
and Groom Lie Hidden for Three Days, there is no rhyme and there isn’t any
fixed structure. He seems to use a construction made by the alternation of the
two characters of the poem that he presents to the reader.
For example, we can see it in the final verses,
when Hughes changes from line to line the protagonist of each action. This
effect also gives a feeling of rapidness to this part
of the poem, and it gives a more and more intense impression to the poem. It
seems an interchange of life between the mother and the fetus
that she is gestating, who is connected to her ‘With a single wire’ (line 23), the
umbilical cord.
At the first part of the
poem, mother and son are amazed of each other, because they both are finding
new things about themshelves, and then little by
little the child is forming in the inside of her mother, which is seen by
Hughes as a natural and perfect creation, as we can read in the final verse,
when he says: ‘they bring each other to perfection’. Ted Hughes also regards
them as ‘two gods of mud’, making reference with the mud to the fact that the
formation of a child is naturally made only by humans (a woman in this precise
case), and it is a perfect sculpted creation.
I have chosen to analyse this poem because it is very difficult to perceive
if it was written by the hand of a man or by the hand of a woman. Hughes brings
a very good description to the reader of the creation feeling that a mother
should feel when she is pregnant, and that is impossible to him. We should
expect that this poem had been written by a woman who had experienced these
sensations or she was in that moment experiencing it.
In contrast with her
husband’s poem, Mad Girl’s Love Song by Sylvia Plath
is a more violent poem, which uses vocabulary that makes reference to Satan,
hell and death. From a typical point of view, readers would classify Hughes’s
poem as a poem written by a woman and Plath’s poem as
a poem written by a man. Probably it would be this way because of the choice of
vocabulary made by one or the other and the topics that these poems talk about.
We could say that both talk about love but from a totally different
perspective: while Hughes talks about the good things that love brings to people
(the love that a mother can feel for her child), Plath
focuses on the insanity that love can represent for us, bringing suffering,
pain and madness.
To sum up, from my point of
view we can’t distinguish if a poem is written by a man or a woman until we
know the name of the author, and I think that there are no clues that help us
to differentiate which is the sex of the author.
This occurs mainly because
literature provides us with a wider use of language, which helps the authors to
express and to create their feelings although they use imaginary or impossible
situations.
CONSULTED WEBS:
-A poem by Ted Hughes,
Poetry Connection; 9 may 2006; http://www.poetryconnection.net/poets/Ted_Hughes/18557
-Ted Hughes: Poems and
biography; May 9 2006; http://www.poetryconnection.net/poets/Ted_Hughes
-Sylvia Plath:
Poems and Biography; 8 May 2006; http://www.americanpoems.com/poets/sylviaplath
-A poem by Sylvia Plath, American Poets; 10 May 2006; http://www.americanpoems.com/poets/sylviaplath/1411
-Article about Troubled
Relationship of the Poets; Nadeem Azam;
10 May 2006; http://1lit.tripod.com/june2001.html