Plot

Lord Nikolich has promised his only child, Attilia that he will build a church for her wedding and a palace where she and her fiancé Alexander will live after it.

As he has recently sacked the previous builder, he calls for the two best ones: John Damascene, a specialist in houses, and John the Ladder, a specialist in churches. Damascene will build the palace, and Attilia wants it to be as a love letter. The Ladder will build the church.

When the Ladder presents his building maps, he speaks about three churches. The first one will be built, just as Lord Nikolich wants. The second one will be a garden, made of bushes that will grow as the main building raises. The third one is secret, and has to do with Lord Nikolich’s personal improvement and behaviour.

Damascene starts to build the palace, but is usually nowhere to be seen. It seems that he doesn’t want to see Attilia because, as the Ladder said, every building must have a secret.

However, when everything is working the right way, the bush church stops growing. When Nikolich and Attilia go to the building site there are no builders, nor John, and the church is not being built. Instead of trying to find the Ladder to discuss the situation, he calls for Damascene (who he thinks is John’s sworn enemy) and asks him why the church isn’t being finished. Damascene comes with a head bound covering a recent wound, and tells Lord Nikolich that something is preventing the progress on one of the three churches. Nikolich has made something wrong, and the works on the third church, which is being built in heaven, are not progressing.

With the building of the palace, there are things to be said too. One day Damascene calls for Lord Nikolich because he has found a statue in the building site. He wants the statue to be in the hall of the palace, but Lord Nikolich, giving it hardly a glance, tells him not to. So John knocks the statue’s arm off, and starts to “bleed”. Inside the dark marble piece there are muscles, veins and a red liquid resembling blood. It seems this is the evil deed that has prevented the third church from growing (there could be some other reasons for that, though). After this event, Damascene suffers a nocturnal attack (where he is wounded in the head) and cuts his attacker’s forefinger. It is said that the lovers and husbands of the women he had an affair with often try to kill him, thus the scarves and swords. When Attilia and Nikolich hear about this attack, they come to the site to speak with John, Attilia worried about his “child”, Nikolich furious with his worker. He decides not to pay the money he owes them (one more reason for the hedge church to stop growing). Damascene leaves and sends Lord Nikolich a box with a forefinger inside.

Nonetheless, Attilia tries to mend his father deeds by sending John the Ladder a letter with the money to pay for Damascene’s workers time, and some more for him to build a church for someone for whom a box hedge wants to grow. Attilia weeps in the urns Shuvakovich placed (proving him right when he put them there) thinking all her dreams have ended in the worst way, when she sees that the box hedge is growing again. She calls for her father and they go to the site to see the old building, but it is in a ruinous state.

When, later that night, she decides to spend the night at the unfinished palace, she tries to close the door to the room, but she needs to turn the key 30 times in the locker. She finds Damascene’s compasses. When she wakes up in the morning, she sees through the window the marble statue John found. She starts to think of the clues John has left in the palace and decides that he wanted her to go to some place 30 miles east from the palace, Temishvar. When she and Yagoda get there, they find the Church of the Presentation of the Holy Mother of God in the Temple. Inside this church, which is just as her church was going to be, the priest gives her the deed of property designating her, and not her father, as the owner, and two wedding rings from both builders, the son she had imagined and the father she would have deserved.

Also in the palace she noticed one day something particular in the furnishing of the hall entrance. Every object’s name in the room starts with the same letter. This was a game she played with her imagined son when she was a little girl, so that son, Damascene, is playing with her. Pleased by this thought, she goes to the dining-room and starts following Damascene’s lead. When she unfolds the full picture, she finds a map leading her to a place west from Vienna (you can read more on this in Space Analysis). When she gets there, again with Yagoda, they have a reception by the Fortsmeister of Kremsmünster area, and the day after that a lunch with the prelate of the monastery. She writes a letter to her father explaining how the trip is going on. When she decides to come back to Ada, the prelate sends his lieutenant with her. On the way she invites him to come into the coach to talk, and the lieutenant offers Attilia a book about Simeon Pishevich. In that book there was, word by word, the same she had written in the letter to her father and what had happened to her during this travel’s time. Dazed by the fact, Attilia asks the lieutenant about one young man in the monastery by the name of Alexander who came to her at night and seduced her. At this moment, Alexander, lieutenant of the prelate, proposes to her and they reach the climax of their love.

 

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